literature

Look at you

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2. read the italics
3. read all together..



Well you should see yourself, and look
          To watch the steps you take
The few right options you forsook
          Deceive the world you make
Pretending you are oh so strong
          You smile all pain away
You failed in life, and did things wrong
          And wonder every day

When raindrops reach your broken face
          You thank the lord for it
Though you detest the cold disgrace
          It chills the flame you lit
This way no one will ever see
          The tears you cry just now
You hide the fears and live to be
          'Till all you do is bow

Now look at you, the truth revealed
          Your screams leave you so sore
In fright you force it back to sealed
          Again to feel no more
Your feelings starts to bring up hate
          Yet you will not admit
What causes this horrific state
          Not even just a bit

Accepting not that you must find
          A person to confide
You hurt yourself and are too blind
          For hopeful things called pride
With lack of strength which does you harm
          You force your soul to die
It holds back any form of charm
          For this is one big lie

You have to leave though you are weak
          Can't get yourself to say
To end this torture you should speak
          Believing that you may
For maybe paths won't be so clear
          I tell you that you must
To leave it all behind my dear
          You should hold on to trust
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Ryroherewego's avatar
This is amazing! :D It's not often you find poetry that flows so easily, in all three of the ways you can read it :) You must have put a lot of thought into this, it's really good :)

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